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Missing image
Hunger
    is
     a
     subtle
          death

Heart
   break
       is
        not

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Written August 8th, 2003

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    September 19, 2003
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    solid! This one rocks you to the core. The power and raw truth is stunning here. Damn@ This rocks hun


  • August 10, 2003
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    like dude you can put pics on poems? wow. cool poem.
    Becca

  • chasesgirl
    August 9, 2003
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    this is really cool. the pic is awesome and adds everything un=added. thanks for sharing.
    ~~whitney


  • Ghost of a Siren
    August 8, 2003
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    Whoa! Too cool!

  • MysticRoseTears
    August 8, 2003
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    how did you get that pic on it??? very pretty i like the set up

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