Gone
How is it the ones we least except
Holding truth in every gaze
It is those who leave us
Never to come back again
Missing
This endless longing that I hope to find
In the faded prints that he left behind
Tepid prints fading in the summer sun
Holding the memories deep within
Forgotten
I can not say for much
I was supposed to forget
All that we had and all we where
Just a whisper in the autumn breath
Memory
Still crying at night
Waiting for another chance
Words wishing to never exchange
How can I tell you that I want you back
Author notes
Awsome idea..
A contest entry
- Have you had Distant Tears? by Whoochi.
900 points, ended June 25, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful and very original
A amazing write your words flowed so well like a flowing steam. Awaiting for to embrace someone you love and miss. Such poetic write. I really enjoyed the way you expressed your self.
(LISA)
"This endless longing that I hope to find
In the faded prints that he left behind
Tepid prints fading in the summer sun
Holding the memories deep within"
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Loved the structure nad the flow was awesome in this..its simple yet elegant.."Just a whisper in the autumn breath" TY for entering; Best of luck
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Thank you and also thanks for the great inspiration you put in the form of a contest..
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