Eyes closed
finger tips tingling
heart aching
as he faded away
memory of his words
'You'll always be my blessing'
etched upon my heart
In my darkest hour
He always comes to me
Reminding with his spirit
How good love could be
Author notes
This was inspired by contest holder's (Whoochi) poem Distant Tears
Tenderly taking
the tips of my fingers,
to his loving lips...
reflection of my
stained-glass soul
seen in his eyes
moonbeam smiles
dance across his face,
leaning in
whispering
babys-breath words,
all too often heard
"You'll always be
my blessing"
as a single aching tear
spills over his
cheek,
he
walks
away
A contest entry
- Have you had Distant Tears? by Whoochi.
900 points, ended June 25, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful write Soothing as you think of him always returning.
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Absolutely gorgeous...How you mixed my deppest thoughts about a moment in my life...life altering moment...and YES he DOES always come to me, reminding me....Best of Luck! TY for entering...
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