Shades of circumstance
Brought me to this place
Unfortunate realities
Take my dreams away
Climax of love's song
Faded light lingers
Broken soul remains
Distant heart repeating -
"My love exists the same"
Bliss elusive
Weighs against my face
Sting of life's cruel fate
Tosses wishes away
End of true happiness
Light fixture shattered
Wounded core stings
Distant heart repeating -
"My love exists the same"
A contest entry
- Have you had Distant Tears? by Whoochi.
900 points, ended June 25, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh Fruit rollup, this is splendid,best write from you yet, I think...love ya, best of luck! TY for entering...
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This still seems happy. You have not one un-romantic bone in your body, perhaps the bone which has a extra letter but isnt a bone, lol.
Either way, you know your good.
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Nicely Done
This is very nicely written. I liked this piece very much. Well done poet and good luck in the contest.
Write on
Toohot2handle27
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