They'll only remember our smiles or so it seems
Because that's all I know they've seen
Is this a night that spans forever ?
Or a dawn that intends never to come?
I see the rain on my window outside
I think of the time we've spent together
This is my life, dancing before your eyes
Safe and secure, I wait here on my own.
Without you I'm so lost and so broken
Please take the wheel that to you I give
You know I'll run, don't let me leave
It's time to wipe my eyes and live
The windows are cold to touch
My fingerprints litter the glass
The skylight glowing gently with
Vague hints of the impending dawn vast
I fell to sleep before I could see
The sun has risen, shed's light on me
The light was there, I just had to wake
To see the chance was mine to take
Author notes
ya...many thanks to the most awesome seemaj for last linenesssss
Please tell me what you think
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Brilliant!
i love it! good work!
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"It's time to wipe my eyes and live" That's my favorite line. Great poem.
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it's wonderful
xo
kandy -
is pretty
<3Flo
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I like it
I like you
Good work
Hope to see you soon
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Very nice write, good images and descriptions. I like the overall feel of it. A trapped feeling and unable to leave. Thanks for sharing and keep writing !!!!!
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wow this is incredible!!! love it imensely! Best ever!! well done Beckness
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I like how you wrote this! you did a great job!
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again...beauitful..
you are amazing babe...
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I got here by random. I am glad I did. This is a wonderful write. Thank you so much for sharing.
I love the line, "Vague hints of the impending dawn vast" It has a beauty to it. -
*cries*
new best poem ever
until the last line
*adds 2 favourites*
love it
love you
SeeJ
(this is short coz i didnt wana waste ur time fumbling for words. you know im in awe. its enough )
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