You watch me cry, and watch
me run to the river's start
With hope of washing away
The pain of today and yesterday
You watch me try so hard,
But my tears, they aren't enough
I grab the grass behind,
Clutching to my 'someday'
You watch me fall to my knees
But you don't help me yet
You know just what
I need to see
I saw myself in the water's deep
All alone the way I wanted
What I thought was best
For other's and for me
You watched me look up
Across the river to see
That I wasn't alone
You were right there
...with me...
Please tell me what you think
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amazing
what a great poem
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Bek Honey, this is an amazing write, the flow and imagery are just splendid.
It's great to read you again, it's been a while, sorry.
Love
Cathy
xxxx
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Very nice. This almost has a spiritual feel to it.
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Hey. awsum bec!!! Such imagery! incredible... ur my herro
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Good write, a lover plea and then to find he was right there with you. Good images and show of you emotions. Thanks for sharing, keep writing.
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this is beautiful baby girl!
I love it and you to pieces...
missing you
and id give u 100 claps if i could
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holy shit....
excuse my french but damn!!!
this is well
umm
im not sure how to say it
its def. the best thing i've read in a long time
you did it so well
and well
it just
works so .... rightly
=(
my brain fails my heart
i love this so much.
it's brilliant
*jealous sigh*
wow
SeeJ
ur
wearer
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