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Frozen Tears...

The coldness of your shoulder
Just put me in a freeze of time
Thought I would manage to smile
But my lips seem still , eyes cold
So when you look me in my eye
You thought you saw all just glitters
Though my dear,there were frozen tears...
~Sunny.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 12, 2007

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    this is a sad poem, that as i read i think of how i treated this one close friend of mine, keep it flowing