My mind made a movie
Of us last night
Where everything was beautiful
And all the wrongs were right
Please tell me what you think
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Good
You shoud go back and add more. The flow from the beginning is great and melodic. Following in your foot steps:
There wasn't a lot of drama
nor the aggravation of a plot
It was almost like a "FAIRY TALE"
telling of the love we've got.
Hope you've been well.
Long time no hear from my friend. "BOO"
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hey that's sounds really great.. do you think i can add that?, it can then be from us...
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What the heck!!!
"Oh..I loved her so long"
lol
This is too good to be so short
Like come on!!!!
You are talented
And I want more!!!
No im just teasing...kind of
This was inspiring
Maybe I'll finish it for you...
No...lol...thats your job
Keep them comin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Much Love!
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yr funny, i like you
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4got applauses
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Very Nice
I can imagine this in motion and the fact sof tyhe wrongs being dundone to be done correctly that is just awesome. you really have an active imagination and I like that. any ways very well penned and wonderfully done at that keep up he good work
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Yes, in dreams things can work out like they do in fairy tales, with happy endings. Is that enough to keep it all together during the day? Deep thoughts come through in these few lines.
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Nice write So much can be read into this one. Well done indeed
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