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Happy after all

I'll find myself
A quiet place
An empty space
To fill my soul
The one you stole,
Hid in the wall
Of sunshine rays
Of perfect days
Of dreams I chase
At Satan's ball.
I am the witch
Who lost control,
Which makes me
Happy after all.

A contest entry

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  • tiarna
    August 1, 2007
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    great write


  • dream5111
    July 23, 2007

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    "Of dreams I chase
    At Satan's ball.
    I am the witch
    Who lost control," is my favorite part good luck


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 20, 2007

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    Different and interesting. Good luck in the contest.


  • tawk gold member
    July 20, 2007
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    Great write so full of emotions. Good luck in my contest


  • Gone
    July 19, 2007
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    I didn't enjoy this poem, the rhyme scheme all felt a bit forced, and I didn't really understand what you were trying to say

    sorry, and thanks for entering!
    x


  • Gone
    July 5, 2007

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    Thanks for entering... I will give a detailed review prior to announcing the results

    cheers
    James


  • Dark Whispers
    June 19, 2007

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    This my be short but it is very well written, I like the rhyme scheme , but you did no oput the form you used in your authors notes


  • Florida Sunshine
    June 18, 2007

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    Oh the poem maybe be short~ but it gives a lot! I think you did a great job! good luck in the contest!


  • JohnS
    June 13, 2007
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    sweet!

    good poem! i love it! so it's saying that you found a way to be happy with your life.

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