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Fireflies

setting sun brings dusk
warm breezes on summer's eve
fireflies twinkle bright

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Won't say I'm good at the haiku thing, but won't learn if I don't try!

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  • intanglio2ring
    June 21, 2007

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    I love your haiku!

    Dear StormGoddess,
    I can feel that special breeze over here!
    I like the feel this gives!
    We lucked out on the contest - but I think this is great!
    Tang


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      June 21, 2007
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      Thank you sweetie. Coming from you, that is a real compliment! Appeciate it hun.

      Storm

  • whispernthedark gold member
    June 15, 2007

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    Very pretty, and I love your wallpaper. Nice write. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    whisper

  • acqua
    June 14, 2007

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    Lovely! I think this is quite good, love the image of the fireflies, the whole poem brings forth a peaceful feeling, good luck in the contest and all the best!~


  • WarrioroftheHeart
    June 11, 2007

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    Very nice, you got the syllable count right, which is the only thing I know about haiku for certain, and it placed a lovely evening scene in my mind when I read it.
    So I think you did very well, good luck in the contest.

    Adrian

  • Heavenly Angel
    June 11, 2007

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    Very nicely done; I think you wrote the haiku quite well, actually! Wishing you all the best in this contest!
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