I shouldn't of gone with him though I wanted to. As I gazed into his sliver lushes eyes, only to be matched by his midnight blue lucks, that fell upon his shoulders seductively. It was as if I were under a spell. For which I had no control he played me like a violin soon to be in his room and on his bed.
As the seductive dance plays out I can't resit him not mind, body, or soul. As he caresses my body and kisses my neck I lose all my control, content with the power he has over me. I hardly realize his kiss has turned into a bite until the blood drips down my chest like dynamite. But to far gone in a trance I refuse to let go of this love dance. Foe he has licked the blood off my breasts. And then kissed me with great romance. Driven mad by loves kiss I pull him on me more to get his full embrace. As he penetrates in my hidden cove, I shiver with delight. As I was about to peak I hear a squeak I open my eyes to see bubbles floating upon my skin, as my foot pounds a rubber duckey. I realize he was never there I had fallen asleep in my nice warm tub full of candles, bubbles, and of course my squeaky rubber duckey.
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- Gothic Erotica by Momma Majeski.
370 points, ended July 2, 2007, 7 entries
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CUTE!!
hahahahhahahahahaha... OMG that was such a twist and i adored it so....
wow... sad to say i think alot of us have had those moments... god knows i have...
thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest!!


