My heart is pounding,
My breath has left,
I'm being strangled,
Its unrelenting.
Every time I see you,
I get lost in your eyes,
A sea of beauty.
I wish I knew how you felt,
I think I'm in love.
But no chain binds us,
You still wander,
And I still wounder.
Do you see me?
Do you think about me?
Do you know I'm here?
I want to know when I can see you,
I want to see you.
Even though I feel this way,
I wounder and I wander,
And now I think I know.
What this is
Its bigger then you,
Its bigger then me.
Its us put together,
With love and a hearts
Simple breeze.
Please tell me what you think
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wow
This poem was great, very short but the end was amazing, well done!!
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thanks for the comment.
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This is amazingly written.. the idea strings together just right. good job!
.SapphireEyes.
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thanks for your compliment
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I just wanted to say
Thought you needed to know
These feelings you have
Need not to be let go.
A Love Incense !
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thank you!
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Wow
this is amazng. Very well penned, I am so glad you invited this to the group for reading. I enjoyed this. Gr8 job.
Ephiphany
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thanks
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Very nice poem! Love how you worded it. So whos the lucky guy? Just kiddn' peace!
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thanks for the comment
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