This is how it works, and we cannot change who or what we have become.
Error,
It’s so irreplaceable that a single misshapen can convert one soul to be completely different than before. May it be good, or dreadful, either or it still alters the ground you’re standing on that holds you together.
I know this much is true, I can feel it in my lungs clogging every breath, making me choke. To become something you never dreamed possible is daunting. I sat down exactly eleven days ago to write out a story, my story. But, I realized that the dates and things were converted into a heaping mess. Toying with a break down, this became more important. I decided I wanted to show every one who I am now. Not what I have done to get me here. But, to tell the present first you have to share the past.
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Just something that I am working on. Defiantly not finished.
Please tell me what you think
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wow
dang thats an attention getter for sure...had me hanging on every line...great i can't wait till it is finished!
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amazing start though.. i look forward to reading the rest of it.i love it
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Definitely is great....
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thanks.
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i can't wait to see you progress with this piece. its already breathtaking and gives such a clear view into your soul. every sentence is perfect... and it will only continue to perfect even more as you add more. i'll be on here more so i can keep reading, i finally came out of writer's block and am posting again. :-)
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