Beer [bottles] all over..
Dragging
me d.
o.
w.
n. to a b.o.t.t.o.m
I *never* wanted to [hit]
The seduction <3
R.e.d.u.c.t.i.o.n of my m*o*r*a*l*s
I could [NOT] or would n.o.t quit.
I did,
I'm [good],
I s.w.e.a.r.
Author notes
If you think you have a problem with Drugs or Alcohol, you probably do. Call your local AA/NA office and find a meeting near you. Find out for yourself.
In a list
A contest entry
- ROUND 1; Perfect Prewrites by They Say Shannon.
450 points, ended September 17, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wanted to see what dirrty pritty was
Now I know. well done thanks NIc
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nice job..progress not perfection...thats my motto
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I wanted to see what dirty pretty poems are and now i know and it made me laugh.
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This is nice.
Simple and quick.
I especially liked the line,
"I never wanted to hit the seduction."
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That was nice.
This was a nice piece. I'm glad you advocate help for such issues!
I'm sorry though, but you didn't follow a rule so I'm going to have to, unfortunately, DQ you. :/
Good luck with your writing and thank you for entering! < -
"I *never* wanted to [hit]
The seduction <3
R.e.d.u.c.t.i.o.n of my m*o*r*a*l*s"
BRILLIANT, very good, short and sweet. thank you!!!
good luck
much lvoe Kaydee
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Lol I have a problem, but I like it better that way
Awesome write. Good imagery!
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this is interesting in a very good way great poem
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I like how you formatted this with all the cool...graphics? Not the right word, but you know what I mean. The picture also helps give the reader a visual [incase they don't know what beer looks like?? lol] I liked your author's notes at the end too, gives out a good messege to people who need help. Good luck in the contest!
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I really like this one. It's a really good write and has a good message behind it. I can relate to this in a way. Great Job and thanks for entering.
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Short, but good
Good job!
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