Your words are twisted
covered in lies
dripping with deception
I cleanse myself
of your existence
In a list
A contest entry
- Another Five Lines or Less by Heavenly Angel.
750 points, ended June 20, 2007, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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And another one....
you are the only poet where I am trying to read each and every one of your poems....this is fantastic...I love your ones about lost love and hurt and pain because you express that so beautifully mom. I hope we both find true love one day!!
Your son! -
Dark and to th point. Very well done .Blessings. d
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SO OFTEN TRUE!
There are indeed so many out there who are deceitful and liars, they go our of their way to hurt others and take joy in it. When we find them we quickly go the other way.
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Oooo!!! This is so dark yet with a rewarding ending.
You have penned a lot of emotion in so few words.
Well done!
Love,
Amera ♥
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Lies and deceit, deceitful and vile people SHOULD be cleansed of; gotten rid of
I like the strength and determination in this piece...very well written
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Rock On!!!
ooooo! I like it
Rock On!!!
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Oh yeah cut those chains and be free to be who you are without lies and chains bringing you down I stand in applause of the power of these lines. brilliant am bookmarking.Thank You for the pleasure of the read.Good luck in the contest but in my mind you have won much more
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WOW...N this is a powerful piece you have penned here...could be an affirmation to read to one's self each and every day
Good luck in the contest
Cathy
xxx
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Rock on Sister, and hold that beautiful head high, for we have no use for the deceit and lies...no room shall fill our heads with such crap...Have I told ya today, how much I adore you!
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