Weave in the woods, in between the trees
Gentle fog at our feet and you holding hands with me
I'm going to take you to a place, a secret of mine
A place to match your perfection, truly devine
On and on we stride through the forever night
Our hearts glowing for eachother under the stars light
I stop once in a while to hold you tight
Kissing you pasionatley while the frost nips and bites
I take your hand again and lead you deeper into the mist
My legs still shaking from the last gentle kiss
"It's almost time baby" as I put my hands over your eyes
I lead you slowly and i can feel your hearts rythym on the rise
I know you'll love what i have, and what your about to see
I promised you the world, and i promised you everything
Are you ready baby? Do you want me to show you whats beyond
Here you are baby, all for you and your perfection
As you open your eyes, you see what i've got for you to hold
I'm holding my heart, my tears and my soul
A contest entry
- A Heart That Calls From Afar (Lyric Inspired) by TheDemonEve.
600 points, ended June 29, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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ah..what a heartwarming piece you have weaved my friend bringing the essence of the love in every word..just wonderful work you did..thanks..
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this was very beautiful
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Wow. This is beautiful, this is perfection in words! Flawless!!!
Best of luck and thanks for entering! -
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glad you enjoyed it
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