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Unfounded Fears

I have so many fears.
Are they all unfounded?
To many for them all to be irrational.
Though I wish they were.

I fear that I will not be good enough.
I hope that she still cares for me.
That I can still make her happy.
And if not that someone will.

I fear I will fail no matter what.
That I am destined to be broken down for ever.
Just a husk of the man I should be.
Alone I sit stuck with these thoughts.

There are those that would tell me I am wrong.
But my fears tell me otherwise.
Filling my head with deppressing thoughts.
I am at the edge gazing over now.

Here I sit, my head in my hands.
Crying, scared and lost.
Fearing the worst is coming.
Hiding as best I can.

My fears, I hope, are unfounded.
I am a good man, I am told.
She sill be happy, as will I.
But in my head they will always linger.

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  • vanteya37
    June 16, 2007

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    Its great you spoke about something which troubles us all more often than not. People forget the possibility that theiir fears are unfounded


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    June 16, 2007

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    wonderful piece, I really
    like the flow of the language and your
    wonderful use of imagery,
    keep up the nice work


  • Olivias Violin
    June 11, 2007
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    You are good enough. Have faith.
    It's impossible to fail at everything.