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- Internal Peace -

 

Internal Peace did find white Light
on its way Home
where Heart was once torn

but has since scarred over
now that Time

offered its sincere apologies-

eventually accepted for a past deed
that should have never been done
and Life’s regret can leave
so restless Spirit can finally rest.




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  • naked roots
    June 13, 2007
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    Oh...I felt this one.
    those apologies are so hard to accept at times...


  • Lauren Noir
    June 12, 2007
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    Oooh, only 50 words and this much quality!
    It's stunning how none of it is forced or cut short
    This is a beautiful message
    The restless spirit
    And finding a level to rest at
    True internal peace
    Well done

    This is a wonderufl piece you have shared
    Much love

  • Turtle74
    June 12, 2007

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    spirit traveling

    Thats what came to mind so thats what i write. Its seems the only time our souls rest is if we should choose to do so. I think we even choose to reincarnate or choose to sit in between forever.


  • Whoochi gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    very well stated..only time can heal mst wounds and all that remains are scars, but one can move on, and find their truest self and truest mate...we do not have mistakes, only life lessons and ecperiences taught....beautiful expression here...


  • Amera gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    You're right a restless spirit can be healed by the scaring of time. I'm glad that peace can find white light.
    Wonderful!

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • soulfultia gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    Loved this, but your first stanza...is superb! Excellent work girly, and always my pleasure to read your talented pennings ~Tia


  • wolfspiritguide gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    powerful message shared in such a limited amount of words to glean much deeper meaning meant as peace of spirit found in self.


  • StarEyes
    June 11, 2007

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    OK, I am no good at word count pieces, but wow!!! for so few words, this is amazing!!!!!!! I love it!!! Best of luck in this contest!!!!!!

    and much love

    Nettie


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 11, 2007

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    Awesome verse you have here, my friend! Your words always touch a place in my heart! All the best to you...always

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