Lisps hang on thin wires
like dirty laundry
flirting with the
sweat that swims
through the air
Fear dresses in jeans
that are far too revealing
Passing tempting glances to
married women
Pouring a drink
and spotting
his newest fantasy
he lights her eyes
and hopes it rains like hell
Author notes
50 words
Men like that-
A contest entry
- 50 Words (6) by naked roots.
450 points, ended June 13, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Men like that, DOnt worry I'm not going to rant about it, lol I know I'll never be like that. Interesting poem, which in 50 words you pinned it very well.
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I could tell that you wouldn't be a guy like that.
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Yes...run like hell away from a man like that!
Nothin' but trouble I tell ya!
(and even worse...there are women like that too!)
Great work
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