Tainted remnants of yesterday
spill through her window looking for answers
frozen between syllables her sentences bring icy hope
as the wind begins to blow
forbidden burst of blue rain pours down
her face when eyes dance across blank faces
lost in dreams of fantasized romances
her love is like crystal memories
that one Summer died in a box
shimmering in silence
so waltzing in echoes her heart dies young
as stars softly fade into a moonlight bliss
Author notes
Option 1
forbidden bursts of blue,
waltzing through echoes,
tainted remnants of yesterday,
when eyes dance,
that one Summer,
shimmering in silence,
like crystal memories,
lost in dreams,
as stars softly fade,
frozen between syllables......[Very Very nice wordbank]
A contest entry
- For The Creative At Heart...... by poet2angels.
725 points, ended June 24, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A very deep glance into memories fading. You used the phrases well, weaving a piece all your own. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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lovely poem and great use of the word bank
TY for entering!
Lynda
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thats a excellent use of imagery and that wordbank, I really like "forbidden burst of blue rain pours down
her face when eyes dance across blank faces" It created such a clear image in my mind, This is a really good write and i'm sure it will do well in the contest its in, goodluck with that
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great use of the word bank. I especially like
that one Summer died in a box
shimmering in silence
well done. and thanks for the comments on my poem.
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