Your love,
tender and rare,
has captured all of me
filling me with such happiness
romance
Author notes
Cinquain:
Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed
as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines.
Another form, sometimes used by school teachers to teach grammar, is as follows:
Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.
A contest entry
- Forms: Sedoka, Acrostic, Haiku, Cinquain by whispernthedark.
575 points, ended June 21, 2007, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulations on the silver trophy!
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Sweet
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thanks teach!
well look at you... that's cool
well said, described and put into motion...
sweet, short and says it all!
bravo
Kj
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This fits both versions of the Cinquain. Well done!
A simple, lovely cinquain.
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Perfect cinquain, I love it. Very well written. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
whisper
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good
Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.I found this explanation very helpful and your poem conforms to it beautifully
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Nice form. Enjoyed. Smiles!
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