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lv...Evening Under the Stars

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the darkness was upon us

as we walked along the beach

listening to the waves wash the shore

romance was within our reach

 

we stopped for a hug in the breeze

your arms caress me with love

my emotions weakened to your touch

my body fit yours like a glove

 

the sky was darker shades of blue

as the stars begin to shine

the twinkling lights brightened the way

for us to have more time

 

we spread our blanket on the sand

to lie and watch the sky

you cuddled me closely in your arms

as a shooting star sailed by

 

we both made our secret wish

upon the shooting star

then we made passionate love

our bodies were both on fire

 

as we tumbled with delight

while we were conjuned in fun

the aura of colors surrounded us

our bodies became as one

 

we lie exhausted for a while

watching the big dipper and mars

the heavens were magnificent

as we spent our evening under the stars

 

 

 

 

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  • Ignis Corpus
    June 11, 2007

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    we stopped for a hug in the breeze

    your arms caress me with love

    my emotions weakened to your touch

    my body fit yours like a glove



    the sky was darker shades of blue

    as the stars begin to shine

    the twinkling lights brightened the way

    for us to have more time

    i love those lines they are wonderful good poem, reavaling but not to realeaving you know? veryy wonderful good job

    • A floatingleaf silver member
      June 11, 2007
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      thank you bj for the lovely comment and the bunnies...glad you like it...float


  • arafura gold member
    June 11, 2007
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    under the stars...

    Romantic and sensual work... flows and reads well!