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Eye Contact

I want to see that slow smile broaden, suddenly:
The crinkles at the corners of your eyes deepen
In surprise and consummate delight;
I want to hold your gaze with mine
Looking up at you, wantonly, from beneath.

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  • Perdix
    June 20, 2007
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    I like this

    nicely to the point and a great use of words

    regards

    Perdix


  • Zero the Hero silver member
    June 11, 2007
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    Good five liner ... great content for such a short poem .. nice one


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 11, 2007
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    Well done this is!
    So much said in so very few lines
    Thank you for sharing!