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I like pie

I like pie
pumpkin pie
apple pie
lemon pie
cherry pie
chocolate pie
but the best pie
is pumpkin pie

A contest entry

tell me if you like pumpkin pie too

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  • AnotherName
    June 25, 2007

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    I beg to differ...lemon pie is the best! LOL Thanks for this entry. It made me crave something sweet. LOL Good Luck!


    April


  • soulfultia gold member
    June 20, 2007

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    Short cute and whimsical! I enjoyed the read and wish you luck in the contest My pleasure this evening, ~Tia

  • Avani
    June 16, 2007

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    Haha, very cute. I liked this a lot and I have to say I agree! Well, no, maybe that was a lie - blueberry and apple are pretty darn good I liked how simple this was: short, sweet and to the point. Honest, and without all the extra "cushions" surrounding the words. Random (and I love that). Good write, you have all of my luck in the contest!

    -L


  • Travis7
    June 14, 2007

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    this was my first poem and i just wanted to get some poem in so i just randomly thought of pie but i think that this poem is really good but i think i put it into to many contests but i hope i can at least win one of them
    THANKS FOR ALL THE COMENTS
    i really apreciate it
    THANKS ALOT


  • a means to an end
    June 13, 2007

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    that was so absolutley random its past humorous. every single day at least once or twice I say "I like pie" in a very matter of fact voice. i say it so evry body hears it to so every one know that "i like... pie" interesting write and by the way, cherrie pie is the best. pumpkins only good around thanksgiving, cherry is good all year around


  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    June 13, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Nice little poem to honour the joy of pie and especially pumpkin pie (one of my favs too)

    Glad to have you here at AP and please feel free to contact me or any online Greeter if you need help here at AP.

    Let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosemary


  • Florida Sunshine
    June 12, 2007

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    What an interesting write. I bet you like pie. Thanks for your entry. I really appreciate you submitting your poem into my contest. Unfortunately its only a 2 or 3 line contest, not sentences. I'm sorry~ But I really like the write alot! you did great!


  • esroddo silver member
    June 11, 2007
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    Good write.

    Your made me hungry. I to love Pumpkin best. But Chocolate is second on the list. (Lisa)

    • Travis7
      June 11, 2007
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      thanks for the comment
      i really apreciate it
      and i like pie alot
      and i know that his poem is random
      but which one of my poems aren't lol


  • I Love My Marine
    June 11, 2007

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    this is random...but cool even though i hate pumpkin pie oh well you do lol i'm sure you'll win the contest and not me lol

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