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Acts Of Desire!

Love without passion is
as cruel as the grave.
Alive is the soul that
fervently craves.

A contest entry

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  • Perdix
    June 20, 2007
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    Good poem

    I think your poem is good especially like the last two lines well done

    regards

    Perdix


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 14, 2007

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    Nice and very short words.....

    i liked it . it sorta like the way i write my poems when i am pictured inspired. great work darell and not enough comments.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 11, 2007

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    Well done and so very true! Thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of the contest; I wish you the very best