There are many fish in the sea
Yet I choose to cast pearls before swine
I learn that all that glitters is not gold
Another broken love story to be told
Oh this love is blind
Love is not about who you can live with
But whom you cannot live without
Yet your absence fills my heart with doubt
Love conquers all
It’s better to have loved and lost
Than to never love at all
But I regret the pain of this bitter fall
T’was love in your eyes and lust in your heart
I see the writing on the wall
If you love someone.. Set them free…
And I’ll pray forever that you come back to me.
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
525 points, ended June 14, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
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525 points, ended October 19, 2007, 21 entries
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Fab!!
I loved this, it was a great read indeed and so deserving of the gold. Best of luck in this contest! -
You rock, Helen. Congrats.
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that was supposed to say thanks!!!
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Thanks Ryan.
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Excellent
I know this is probably going to be the most lame comment I have yet to give you but, pardon me anyway. I love this Helen! Words cannot even come close to expressing just how fantastic this really is!! Dripping with one cliche after another, the first stanza being my absolute favorite, this is truly darling. Thank you for laying it on thick! I love you for it and for entering!! Brava, brava!!
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Oh thank you... thank you ... thank you, *breaks into song* ... " Did you ever know that you're my hero..."
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And you are the wind beneath my wings!
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Wow, you've got everyone beat here. This is marvelous, you've put so many in here, and it doesn't feel like it at all. I can't say enough how well this reads. I especially loved the first stanza, but I really just love it all. This is an excellent entry. Good luck in the contest.
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Wow...this is a fantastic piece! I absolutely love it! How've you been? I hope all is well! Nice poem, again
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