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Crystal Tears

As prisms of light dance around my skin
Finding every crevice to take sanctuary
The massive ashen billows
Cover the terrain in a profound obscurity

The enticed reflection
Pulls at tender strings
And leaves a craving
For something higher

The explosion of God's torpedoes
Echo through unlistening ears
As crystal tears pelt the thirsty earth
And give redemption from resent heat

The pain of watching tears of crystal
Takes the warmth from a dead heart
And gives the reminder of the
pain filled yesterdays and bleak tomorrows

The whispers of the skies
Echo sour goodbyes
And stone cold lies
As they take me by surprise

The reminders of a dark past
And the cold future
Of deep pain
And depressed remorse

As the crystal tears
Bounce on a rose petal
The past haunts my thoughts
And I shed my own crystal tear

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  • edit my world.
    August 16, 2007

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    a crystal tear sounds expensive lol jk
    i like this...beautifully written with lots of feeling
    thanks for enetering