Pastel Portrait by Bazza.
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I love to look deep down into your eyes,
and write for you sweet lullabyes,
from knowing you my world is all light,
even throughout the darkness of night.
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5 lines or less contest.
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In a list
A contest entry
- Another Five Lines or Less by Heavenly Angel.
750 points, ended June 20, 2007, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow. A great poem with a good deal of imagery, and the portrait just adds to it. Good luck in the contest. Great job and keep writing!
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WOW
Wow! That is the best portrait i ever seen Barry! And great poem! That is amazing!
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This is so beautiful. Short, sweet and full of love. And such a wonderful picture too. Such talent. All the best of luck in the contest.
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THIS IS SO SWEET!
A dear one is always our light even during our darkest night. Wonderful poem.
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A beautifully written short poem to accompany an equally beautiful painting. Nice work. Best of luck in the contest.
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Beautiful painting of a lovely young lady and this piece fits so well. Blessings. d
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hi my dear daddy
A very nice tribute to her. Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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This is so beautiful. I love how you fit such beauty into such shortness. =o)
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Lovely!
Lovely painting, lovely lady, four lovely lines. Well done!~ Sue
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Love can cause one to make beauty.
And a lovely review !! Thanks so much especially with the sweet sound of applause. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Barry
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AAwwwwwww Bazza, this is beautiful and what talent you expose to us now, not just a good poet but a good artist as well. Like you Baz, I paint, but I do watercolours. I wonder how much stress we have laid out on canvas and writing paper between us. Well done my friend and good luck in the contest. Val.
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Bloody 'ell you're a talented lad our Bazza - a beautiful portrait of an Asian girl. She looks Thai, would that be right?
RT.
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A Lovely Poem
Such a lovely poem my friend. I can see where your heart and thoughts are. Thank you for sharing her beauty and your beautiful poem. Ah to be young again. But youth is fleeting and so is love. You take care my dear friend. Sandy
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A wonderful picture that is only made more beautiful with your words.
Soulful Woman
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Four lines of beauty with an image to match My friend that one should be given so much talent is unfair Excellent both in words and image Good luck in the contest
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Love causes many things.
Gee thanks Legend for the kind words and applause, I am humbled by such a great poet.
Barry
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I sense a deep love. A beautiful poem dear Bazza written for a beautiful woman. You are a talented artist too.
Hugs and love,
Petratani
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I got the clap.
Thanks love .. you don't write a bad poem either .. Thanks for clapping me so well ... ooohhhhh !!
Barry
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Most beautifully and wonderfully written! Much enjoyed this piece! Thank you for sharing!
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I love nice words ..
Thanks honey I appreciate kind words like that ... great stuff and thanks for a contest.
Bazza
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