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Hmmmmm......

Something tells me I might be wasting my time
Don’t know what it is, but I feel it
To think of something in one night
Write about it in no more or less than fifty words
Then sit in limbo to see what the mood is
Don’t think I’ll bother.

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  • m2lost24get
    December 23, 2007

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    this actually made me laugh and think as often i see the specific word counts and think yea i can do it then i see the prompt and im like oh sh*t brain stops and draws blanks, well done


  • naked roots
    June 13, 2007

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    hmmm...
    well it's a shame you didn't bother, I would have liked to have seen what you really could have came up with it you had put more effort into it.


  • Cannonsfire
    June 11, 2007

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    Mmm you in limbo, interesting thought, lol you are too funny dear scot


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 11, 2007

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    Lol, now this isn't what I was expecting! Nope not at all, not one of your finner 50 liners! But nonetheless, maybe sitting in limbo wasn't such a good idea! lol ~Sie


  • Sandygram
    June 11, 2007
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    Fifty words may seem alot
    When a brain you may have not
    Try you may and try you must
    Try this magic fairy dust
    It may give you a thought or two
    Then your brain will be brand new
    Then once again you can post
    Great poems we can toast

    Here's to you Brother Mike!!!



    • Silent Cougar Moderators member
      June 11, 2007
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      see that...made me lose count as I went on, fifty, bang on the button, your too clever Sis.

    • Silent Cougar Moderators member
      June 11, 2007
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      aw.. Cheers Sandy, you trying to get me drunk with all that beer, you just want to see me make a fool of myself, ooooh...only, I do that without beer, what a sobering thought... hehe.
      Thanks Sis.


      • Sandygram
        June 11, 2007

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        Hehehe!!!!

        Well Mike I will send you some
        I will send it expresso so it arrives real soon. Sandy


  • klassy lassy
    June 11, 2007
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    Oh, yeah!

    ...the fairy dust!

  • klassy lassy
    June 11, 2007

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    LOL.... so will just send you a hug and some fairy dust to inspire you. (When the light comes on you'll know they've been there. )


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    Not bad for a poem you couldn't bother posting for this contest Well done and best of luck in the contest (the one you're not bothering to enter)


  • Dragons Lady
    June 11, 2007

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    I like this. A poem about not being able to write a poem. An interesting approach. Well done. Got a smile anyway. Good luck in the contest.

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