She holds brittle life within her hands
The delicate touch of her tiny fingers
Carry the golden butterfly to safety
Upon a red rose scented with grace
She releases her boundless compassion
A contest entry
- Another Five Lines or Less by Heavenly Angel.
750 points, ended June 20, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very lovely indeed, children and butterflies, two beautiful things combined together.... Enjoeyed it. All the best...
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Awwww Beautiful
A very beautiful write here sweetie
Little ones enjoy life in such simple ways.The butterfly effect was just amazing.Your descriptive pen has painted such a wonderful painting with words.The joys of being a mother watching children engulf treasures of nature in such beauty.Love the write,simple and understanding with ease.Sometimes there is more to life as we watch our children.
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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Simply exquisite visuals with this poem. The innocence of a child blending with nature.
Soulful Woman
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Beautiful imagery of a small child carrying a butterfly. I love how you have put so much into so little. Best of luck in the contest.
Hugs and love,
Aunty Petra xo
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Nicely done!
Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest; I truly liked this write!
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