Hey,
Do you know what?
I thought today was perfect.
Until you showed up,
Out of the blue.
You attacked me.
And my so called friends,
Just turned their backs.
Turns out that one of them,
Told you I was here.
Some secret.
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Ten days later
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Now I'm pregnant.
Thanks.
A contest entry
- 50 Words (6) by naked roots.
450 points, ended June 13, 2007, 8 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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ummm...
I'm really not sure what to say to this one.
It seems like more of a rant than a poem, but it's very emotionally moving.
I'm sorry if you've really had to go through this in life.
hugs to you
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Thankyou for your comment, and it is appreciated, as well as the honesty. Fortunately I have not had to go through this, although I did have some feelings that spurred me to write this. Thanks again.
Take care
XxX
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You write such random poems snads.
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