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Waters of Fabel

Sweet are the waters of Fabel;
Rushing o'er sands of night.
Lost in the dreams of ages,
In the writer's pens of light.

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By me and dragondancer!

Few lines, but they certainly sounded interesting to me.

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  • coffeeangel316
    June 11, 2007

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    short and sweet with a lot of detail included I really liked it just please put your name in the authors box.


    • Meriweather
      June 12, 2007
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      Oop...sorry. Doing that right now! Thanks for the reminder!

      -D.D-


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    June 11, 2007
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    Indeed .. few lines and few words..but very interesting and magical..
    I love the ending.. I guess almost anything can be achieved by a "writer's pen" (or pencil in my case )

    I really enjoyed reading this, so keep on writing and good luck in the contest.
    Nooni