Starting in Ohio,
Ending in California,
It was the best
trip I ever had.
In a car,
we really went far.
The states we went through:
Indiana,
Illinois,
Iowa,
Nebraska,
Colorado,
Utah,
Nevada,
California!
Author notes
Age 9
A contest entry
- Hey come on all you KIDS! LOOK!!! Enter this Brill Contest! A poem about the best holiday/vacation you've ever had ! 12yrs and under by swanridur.
600 points, ended June 17, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Best of the Best by broken-colours.
500 points, ended August 6, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Awesome!
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yeah you got bronze !
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good!I loved it! is it true?
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Well done and thank you so much for entering the contest. Good luck
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Yay!
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