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Foundation

Fire dances around my house, the foundation of my life slowly melts.

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  • A Murderous Lament
    June 11, 2007

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    Oo I liek the rhyme it's brilliant!! Best of luck in the contest and great line!!

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33