the sea of glass holds secrets.
its sparkling cover an unbroken seal
of ink-blue wax.
its waves, ripples of euphoria.
Author notes
I'm going to the beach (:
Please feel free to hate, love, suggest, whatever. (:
A contest entry
- Summertime Activities :D by kiwikrazi37.
400 points, ended June 18, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Umm >> please tell me what you think.
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Wow, I just love these lines. I guess that the beach is where you find such inspiration.
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Thank you, and yes, it is. (:
I grew up boating and swimming a lot in VA with my grandparents. (: And horseback riding on the beach. Good memories...
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Your imagery is amazing! And let it never be said that young poets can't produce quality work! Well done!
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Thank you (:
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This is great! It seems like it has some form, but I can't think of it. Sounds like a haiku, but haikus have three lines...
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Haha, thanks. (: Glad you liked it.
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