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Miles Away

You're a thosand miles away but I can still see your beautiful eyes

A contest entry

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 12, 2007

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    i like this one i like this, i said this before but who knew a few words could say so much, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • A Murderous Lament
    June 11, 2007

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    Amazing Reminds me of stuff my Fiance says to me Amazing line Good luck in the contest. Great line.

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33