Yet there's another revelation
On this day I'll tell you this
Understand the importance here
Right now I'll look you in the eyes
Saying without a doubt, I'm yours!
A contest entry
- Another Five Lines or Less by Heavenly Angel.
750 points, ended June 20, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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good poem
I personally like shorter poetry i like the way it cuts straight to the point but you have also done it in a way that is inclusive and draws me in.
good poem
regards
Perdix
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Without a doubt, I am yours. Wonderful poem my friend. You leave me speechless on this one. Good luck in your contest. Tish
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Oh wow. Considering the first line, I wasn't expecting the last line. Sly and sexy. well done.
good luck.
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Such a sweet and loving write this is!
I LOVE a good love poem and this is good...very good, actually
Thank you for sharing; I wish you the best
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