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Unicorn

winged steed
Unicorn flight
Nocturnal flying breed
Imagine love within your sight
Children on unicorns with moonbeam speed
One silver horn and wings of might
Romantic magic deed
Nature’s delight
winged steed

 

 

 

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Rhyming Acrostic Rictameter
A rictameter is a nine line poetry form. The 1st and last lines are the same with the syllable count as follows:
• line 1 - 2 syllables - same as line 9
• line 2 - 4 syllables
• line 3 - 6 syllables
• line 4 - 8 syllables
• line 5 - 10 syllables
• line 6 - 8 syllables
• line 7 - 6 syllables
• line 8 - 4 syllables
• line 9 - 2 syllables - same as line 1

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    You're amazing with form poetry!
    I always come to your pages for help. Thanks.

    -Timothy


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 13, 2007

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    Congratulations on your well deserved gold!
    ROZES 4U

  • piccola silver member
    June 13, 2007
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    This is wonderful. A rictameter and an acrostic. Great job.


  • Whoochi gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    you are such the FORM queen is there any form you ahve not done....I am so impressed and this is such a dreamy portray of a unicorn...exactly how a unicorn should be displayed...exquisite DOLLFACE..I am left in awe...


  • PoetsAngel
    June 11, 2007

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    Oh what a wonderful piece...Unicorn's are my favorite mystical animal. I bow in absolute awe to your pen and talent.



    Cathy


  • Desire gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    Holy Moly!!

    Ok I need CPR!!! I Love this and Oh My Word
    You have outdone Yourself but then each piece You have Brilliant form!!
    Loved it!!
    and You implemented a Gem!!
    -sigh-

    ~walks in a daze~

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    June 11, 2007

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    O' such sweet magic this piece brings with it to the mind of its reader...Thank you so much for sharing~EXCELLENT!


  • azure85 gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    *clapping hands*

    What a great poem, that is a rictameter, an acrostic and rhymes! And what a wonderful subject you chose for it, this is magnificent!


  • PerVirtuous
    June 11, 2007

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    I take more pride in your work than I do my own. At this one, I am puffing out my chest and strutting like a rooster! You are the Best! Three bunnies.

  • Mercury Rising
    June 11, 2007

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    A really wonderful rictameter that you've made
    even more charming by turning it into a rhyming acrostic as well. Best of luck in the contest.

    David Michaels


  • StarEyes
    June 11, 2007

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    HOLY MOLY!!!! What a wonderful read this is!!! I love it!!! I have done a few richtameters, but can not rhyme to save my life, so I just stick with what I can do! Great job on this one!!

    Love,

    Sunshinegirl


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 11, 2007
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    Jee Whiz, you're not giving anyone a chance here. THree forms in one poem? C'mon!

    Great job. You kicked butt with this.


  • JohnnyD gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    Very nice me little Cubbie with sharp claws, who watches me back, very nice...with moonbeam speed, I like it...a lot !


    (how's the preemies doing?)


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    This is certainly the pretty and clever write. 2 forms and rhyme all together in such short lines portraying a beautiful and magical creature. You've done well with this Thanks for sharing. Love ya. La x

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