Abby
My baby girl
I long to hear your laugh
To hold you in my arms once more
You belong with me til the end of time
To comfort you when you're crying
to tuck you in at night
I need you here
Abby
Author notes
This is to my little girl Abbigail
A contest entry
- Diamante or Rictameter by piccola.
450 points, ended June 13, 2007, 6 entries
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Comments
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This reminds me of my little angel, who is no longer with me, I wish for those things too you get 10/10 for making me cry lol....
Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck
Karen -
great job. Great dedication too.
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Beautiful rictameter filled with longing, simply put.
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