I'm half asleep and fully aware
that you're right here and God answered my prayer
to let me find peace in something that's sweet.
I'm close enough now to hear your heart beat
My head on your chest, watching the show
which I dont really see, but your breathing slows
reassuring me that it will be okay
no matter what happens, you're here to stay
We huddle even closer and I take in your smell
I'll remember this heaven, even if it's hell
because it was then I felt alive and free
love opened my eyes, now i can see.
Author notes
didnt turn out the way i wanted it to. i basically just wanted to write something with "close enough to hear your heart beat". but uhm yah. thanks for reading. anything you have to say will be heard and replied to. l8r
Please tell me what you think
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LOVE IT
I hear you telling me you're not happy with it yet, but I understood your journey here and you carried me right along with you. Spend a few minutes looking at it and thinking where you might polish it up someday.
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Well dudes.... i liked it.. and its so cute!!!! AWHHH *with big smiley face* doesnt it feel great to be so in love you dont even care about the world anymore.. ya.. lol anyways loved it loverly..! ttyl luvs ya
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Me es gusta mucho.
Very good Madi. I liked it a lot, the rhyme scheme turned out very well. Gave me a sense of serenity. Great write. Love ya
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I think it turned out fine. There is a sense of calmness and comfort to it. It was a pleasure to read.
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