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_///Reasons-I-Know\\\_

\\\I pack my case.
I check my face, I look a little bit older
I look a little bit colder///


Wakeing up to another lonely day.
The Sun itself is not here to greet me.
Grabbing some cash and an apple, I leave.


///One deep breath, One big steep.
I move alittle bit closer, I move alittle bit closer.
For Reasons Unknown.\\\


I'm Running.
From them.
Again.
To the safest place I know.
The Dead Zone.


\\\I caught my stride.
I flew and flied.
I know if destiny’s kind, I’ve got the rest of my mind.///


Watching the rain fall thrugh the open door.
Sleep tugs at the eage of my mind, lying down, darkness greets me with a smile.


///But my heart, it don’t beat, it don’t beat the way it used to.
And my eyes, they don’t see you no more.
And my lips, they don’t kiss, they don’t kiss the way they used to, and my eyes don’t recognize you no more.\\\


"Hey, Baby bird, wake up."


'Hmmm, That voice, I know that voice.'
Opening one eye, I see his fuzzed over form, "Hi."


\\\For reasons unknown; for reasons unknown.///


My odd friend. A black bird in a cage of canaries.

Mr. Black Bird.


///There was an open chair.
We sat down in the open chair.
I said if destiny’s kind, I’ve got the rest of my mind.\\\


"Hello sweet thing. How are you?" He asked
Sitting up I answered, "Fine. Why are you here?"
A smile dances on his lips, "I like comeing here too, Baby Bird."

\\\But my heart, it don’t beat, it don’t beat the way it used to.
And my eyes, they don’t see you no more.
And my lips, they don’t kiss, they don’t kiss the way they used to, and my eyes don’t recognize you at all.

For reasons unknown; for reasons unknown.///


In quite calm, we watch the rain.


///I said my heart, it don’t beat, it don’t beat the way it used to and my eyes don’t recognize you no more.
And my lips, they don’t kiss, they don’t kiss the way they used to, and my eyes don’t recognize you no more.

For reasons unknown; for reasons unknown; for reasons unknown; for reasons unknown.\\\

Author notes

The song, Reasons unknown is by the killers. I've seen this style befor so I wanted to try it. no bashing please. Mr. BlackBird (wont say his name, 'cause someone might know him) is someone I feel safe with. *blushes* i realy like him, he's nice to me. ....he's also seven years older then me....

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  • HaleyMary
    June 11, 2007
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    Good write. The imagery in this is really good. I suppose as long as you know this person well enough then I guess it's okay to be around them. Just because people are older doesn't mean they're dangerous. I work with some people who are in their late twenties and they are always polite and kind. Keep writing.


    • King Muhaha
      June 12, 2007
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      no, not like that, i mean i LIKE him......COUGHlovehimCOUGH ....i think i've dug my grave..... damn my shyness, is that even a word??!!!