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The Forest

shadows cover sand and ground, water glistening near by,
slithering, hooting, screeching, roaring, howling, barking, meowing...
Many sounds coming from behind the trees, from the heart of the forest!

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A contest entry

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  • PortkeyToNowhere
    June 15, 2007

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    Beautiful honey. Now you have me interested and I wish you could have made it longer but it truly is a beautiful piece!

    x Nicci x


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 13, 2007

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    STUNNING!!!!!

    STUNNING WRITING. VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL AND IMAGERY INDEED. WONDERFUL SHORT PIECE. I WILL CHECK MORE OF YOUR WORK AS SOON AS I CAN. KEEP WRITING. ALL THE BEST

    WAYNE


  • less than a poet
    June 12, 2007
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    wow congrats i love the green one lol dnt know y


  • suseann
    June 11, 2007

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    Yes,they sure do at that. A place so mysteriously magical, and so scary all at the same time. I enjoyed this,thanks for sharing.


  • Myjoy
    June 11, 2007

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    Great visual, made me feel and see what you speak within your mind. A wonderfuly done read. I like the short ones with a powerful punch.


  • Harrisham Minhas gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    Delightful imagery of a forest in this write!

    Thanks for your entry. Good luck in my contest.

    Harrisham Minhas

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