My mother wants to cry for me,but does not think I know.
She fears saying good bye to me befor my time to go.
Let my words calm you moma so you may rest at night.
My illness can never take from me ,my strength or will to fight.
Author notes
Im not sure if I broke your rhyme rule but it was honestly unintentional and just happend that way it is as it came from me on the spot.No disrepect intended.
Please tell me what you think
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Very well written. Nice flow with a true element of honesty to it. The rhyme was right on with a meter to it that kept a good rhythm.
My situation is somewhat reversed from this poem so, it touched me as well. I applaud your work as it is very deserving.
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Being a mother, this hit a soft spot in me.
This is sad...
I think that a parent should never have to bury their child, it's such a tragic thing.
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