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The maid of Orleans

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Such mischief stirs within this cloistered hall

Where shadows slither on the silent stone,

In silent prayers the maid of France lies prone,

I fear her pleas on deafened ears will fall.

Malodorous the smoke falls like a pall,

The battle pyres still burn from dusk to dawn;

This child of Orleans was just a pawn,

Her words the common soldier to enthrall.

Inquisitors with rough and calloused hands

Have stripped her of her dignity and pride

And only God can save her from her fate;

Abandoned by all allies now she stands.

By trickery and falsehood she was tried:

The cardinals have closed their last debate.

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  • mamad silver member
    June 11, 2007
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    I have read

  • sunlightsea
    June 11, 2007
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    nice


  • Hetha gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    WOW! I am a total sucker for historic rhymes! Especially when they tell of strong, courageous women. Sad how these women can only be elevated in status after they die, and how they become victimized by society during their lives. I've read several anthologies of such women, researched volumes of texts about ancient history and culture to find surprising and shocking information, that reveals we didn't always take a demure step behind the men, in historic texts. Great job, and very original poem about Joan of Arc. I enjoyed this.


  • ProudMomma
    June 11, 2007

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    great write i love it...while reading i thought of midevil times...i like reading something differnt once and awhile and this hit it on the spot i enjoyed reading this!!!! keep on writing!!


  • bedovich
    June 11, 2007

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    nice masterblaster master of verse you sonnet is just great i envy u now greatt poem i love lvoe it


  • capricornpoet
    June 11, 2007

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    history of Jeanne D'Arc

    Eloquent verve as this sonnet relives the tragic employ of Jeanne D'Arc, she was indeed a pawn to ruthless France..lovely rhyme and sadness into this tale of a great heroine.


  • billpoet silver member
    June 11, 2007

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    Thank you

    It is a pleasue to read your works and please believe with certainty that they are as greatly appreciated as a Neal Stephenson novel. If you have time, I think you will enjoy my poems - billpoet


  • sassylilpoet silver member
    June 11, 2007

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    very insightful take on the picture and it flows well with rhythm and rhyme.

    line 1- michief/mischief
    line 9- callosed/I think is spelled calloused

    Good luck in the Sonnet contest


    • masterblaster gold member
      June 11, 2007
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      sassylilpoet

      Hi, yes you are right , the spell check was not working so did not pick it up and I should have checked, many thanks, Di

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