Hold me in your arms,
Just for one night,
I'll hold you in mine,
To me it feels right.
This is where,
I wish I could be,
Forever and ever,
Just you and me.
Lost in the world,
Closing our eyes,
Nothing else matters,
We're lost in the sky.
Hold me in your arms,
Tell me that you care,
Hold me in your arms,
I feel adored there.
Kiss me under the stars,
And I will take you away,
Past the Moon and Mars,
With me you shall stay.
Laying by my side,
I feel so alive,
In the still of the night,
Could our love survive?
Hold me in your arms,
Tell me I'm the one,
Hold me in your arms,
Til' our night is done.
Just say my name,
I will be there,
To take away your fears,
Just cause I care.
Take away my words,
Leave me with a smile,
A smile that will last,
More than just a while.
Hold me in your arms,
These feelings are so strong,
Hold me in your arms,
Your the words to my song.
As morning draws near,
I listen to my heart,
It says you're the one,
But I knew it from the start.
Yes I believe,
With me, you belong,
You are the one for me,
You can't say I'm wrong.
So hold me in your arms,
This is all to real,
Hold me in your arms,
Our love is surreal.
I don't want cars,
Or fancy shiny things,
This is because,
You are all I need.
Kiss me sweetly,
As you softly say,
Stay with me,
For the rest of our days.
You held me in your arms,
Just for one night,
Now I'll hold you in mine,
For the rest of our life.
Author notes
#1.
Write about love. Plain and simple, love. Just don't make it too mushy, it'll make me sick.
A contest entry
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Very pretty and sweet. The last stanza was the best. Up until that point it didn't really stick out for me. But that pulled it together and made it different. Good luck!!!
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So so sweet =]
it's simply beautiful
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oh this is beautiful
Wonderful job!
This is a really nice love story -
This is pretty and is very well written. The rhyme and flow are excellent. A nice poem about love without going to far into the mushy.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
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This is very beautiful and heartfelt.
What a wonderful piece you have written
here. I love the emotions and imagery
in this one. Well done and thanks a lot
for sharing it here! Best of luck to you
with it in the contest!
Jeremy0826
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