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Love is just a string of moments
Tied together by simple words
And those words hang in the air
Waiting to be taken out and spoken.
Hearts are just glass
Waiting to be shattered
Taken up by gentle hands
And put back together again.
It's hard to breathe
It's hard to think
When I'm with you
It feels like a dream.
Like I'm walking asleep
In some fantastic place
Your eyes looking onto me
And I wonder what you see.
My heart is racing
My thoughts are jumbled
I don't know which way is up
And I feel like I'm falling.
All over again
Straight downward
Wondering if you'll catch me
But you hold me in your eyes.
I could drown in them
Let the peace overcome me
Like the water enveloping me
Letting my mind come to rest.

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  • Olivias Violin
    June 11, 2007
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    I like how you describe how fragile we are and how simple it can be to unite and be whole in love.