Bitter locked doors hold what only she knows,
Non but the best remain sealed.
Cursed each in her own way
Regardless of the spells
They sit there, just waiting
She needs her release.
Snow White eats her poison.
A trophy forgotten
The golden haired,
Been told what she can't.
Never to bleed crimson tears,
Like fate she is drawn.
The needle, it lays there,
One prick, she is real.
They stand alone
Wanting their princes
To come
To wisk them away.
Fairytales always end.
Author notes
sleeping beauty and snow white - metaphoric real life problems from fairytales. for those of you that don't know..cutting - sleeping beauty and overeating SI/any drugs - snow white
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That's really good very nice.
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That's beautiful.
Now please, I'm interested in this. Explain to me how sleeping beauty and snow white relate to these problems?
Good job and goodl uck -
yes indeed...even disney characters have secret bitter truths on them...I love how you challenged yourself in writing this piece...and I believe in you... "Fairytales always end. "
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facade's mask unveiled - secrets revealed - beneath pretty trappings manifests a storm
a contemporary and well written piece - i especially liked Snow White eating her poison ( a bitter pill to swallow for sure)
best of luck in this contest!
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Very captivating! Good luck in my contest!
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