There is no more hatred..
No more putrid sadness...
For all I see...
Is love between you & me..
You Light My Heart Afire.
With so much more than just desire..
So loving-- you are...
Making perfection is by no means far
I can’t help but to love everything about you..
You are my refuge I know I can always go to
Your Soul Is The Purest In All Land
Your love is my heaven, I don’t understand.
You love me…I love you…
There’s not much more that I can do.
Unworthy but willing, here I stand..
Hoping only that you will keep hold of my hand.
I admire your sweet touch
You capture me with adrenaline rush
As our cheeks brush in this cover of night...
I know holding you here is well worth the fight
A fight I'm not willing to lose or let go
A light you have kindled-- never going slow
I love how your eyes glow, as with the force of the moon...
Oh-- you arouse me so
With lust you fill my mind
Adoring unbound binding all together in sweet rhyme
All these thoughts within me-- full of lust
Could a body,so beautiful, really turn to dust
Sifting dust-- within every loving thrust
A pulse that is rhythmic and equally bold
To lie here forever, our love never growing cold
Author notes
I collaborated with Magick JL on this piece. He is an amazing writer who has in inept sense of the use of words. I hope you enjoy it.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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you both have done a wonderful job on this poem. I enjoyed it.
Oneal
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Very Nice
Great flow.... Good use of rhyming.... It doesn't sound forced.... You've got a good hand in writing.... The only thing I would suggest is make it harder to write.... Now that I feel poetry is too easy for me to write I'm forcing myself to write in form.... Such as Iambic pentameter.... My next poem is going to be in Sestina.... It's a good way to constantly improve.... Make it harder.... You're a great poet.... Keep up the good word....
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wonderful
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