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Apollo's abode
That dreams lie beyond
Tantalizingly unattainable
But drawing inexorably
The sun-scorched horizon

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It's the horizon!

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 11, 2007

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    I can't quite put my finger on it, but this piece kept calling me back. So I had to award for it. Nicely written.

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