It's okay and
I'm okay
So we can each
go our own way
It's no big deal
It wasn't real
Don't worry 'bout
the way I feel
Minor set-back
But now I'm on track
It was just hormones
and all that
Just like the rest
It's for the best
Just need to get it
off my chest....
Okay, I miss you!
There, I said it
So now we both can
just forget it
Author notes
Short and crappy, I know, but I don't have the time to care 'bout that right now.
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A contest entry
- Anything About Having to Move On by Athena of Starlite.
445 points, ended June 27, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love this!!!! I don't think it's crappy at all!! Very well written, it shows the emotions one goes through when they are trying to get over a break-up well. All in all I think that this is an absolutly awesome write!!!!
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this is great. I love the rhyme and flow. I do a lot of free-verse, but rhyme is my favorite. You seem to have a knack for it.
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It's a great spurt of poetic expression, like a shot glass of soul...good job.
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I have to say you are wrong that was a great and short write you konw it is good when it is done and you wish it was not.
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Tough shit. Sorry sweets. The beat to this is very enjoyable. I wish there was more of this to read!! Very nice job.
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Short yes, but crappy, NO
This is very good. It flows really well, and your rhyming is spot on 
I hope things get better for you 
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That's so encouraging, Sweetheart! Thank you so much. If I knew how to make hugs (feel free to teach me) I'd put some here. Right now, I really needed that comment. So thanks so much. Talk to you later. Take care!
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